lunes, 27 de mayo de 2013

Advantages and Disadvantages of being a woman...

I think that being a twenty years old woman in a society like that, has clear advantages and disandvantages.
First of all, in that century there is a more opened mind in terms of the women role.
Young women have many option y their lifes. There ir no women as wife and mother today.
Now, we can study, we can work, we can travel, we can take place in politics things. We can develop us in any area that we want. In the same way as men. Also add to it the vitality and curiosity with the one that tells herself to this age, that it allows you to investigate and to take part in different occasions: from being one evening studying, to play sports or to go out to dance. On the other hand, like women, a wide majority can be employed at diverse works with minor responsibility since they are sporadic works, which allow you to gain an amount of specific money. (But all that momentarily)

As for the disadvantages, the being young women in this company puts us in a vulnerable plane as for the social position opposite to the men. We meet weaker and there continues existing a high degree of machismo that certain times displaces us inevitably towards some specific tasks. (As cooking, to do bathroom, and not to construct or to know self-propelling mechanics) Other disadvantage is to depend on the hormonal period, in which we become very sentimental and of badly humor, condition that prevents us from relating us normally. Other one of the things that it is necessary bear in mind to this age, is the aptitude to be a mother, which puts us in a disadvantageous situation opposite to the men due to having to stop studies and works to focus in the maternity, to this to add him that they are mainly the women who must worry for the contraceptive methods to anticipate early pregnancies. That is to say, to have the complete responsibility of an act that is in mutual agreement.

1 comentario:

  1. Dear leslie,

    Word count: 349. Too many, don't you think?

    Your ideas are interesting, but your writing needs much more work, editing, etc.

    Please, check and correct the following:

    Advantages and Disadvantages of being a woman...
    I think that being a (twenty years old woman) (YEAR, NO –S) in a society like (that) (THIS?), has clear advantages and (disandvantages).

    First of all, in (that) century there is a more (opened) mind in terms of the women’S role.
    Young women have many option (y their lifes). There (ir no women as wife and mother today).

    …we can take place in politics (things). We can develop (us) in any area that we want.

    …which allowS you to (gain) an amount of specific money.

    As for the disadvantages, (the) being young women in this company puts us in a vulnerable (plane) as for the social position opposite to (the) men.

    We (meet) weaker

    …ANOther disadvantage

    …in which we become very sentimental and (of badly humor), condition that prevents us from relating (us) normally. ANOther one of the things that it is necessaryTO bear in mind IN (to) this age,

    …this to add (him that they are mainly the women who must worry for the contraceptive methods)

    Cheers,

    JC

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